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 5/25/2007 11:50 PM
 
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 5/26/2007 12:33 AM
 
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 5/26/2007 1:45 PM
 

kay, thanks for all the comments. here's the next chapter.

The line was pretty short so we were in the ride in no time. We screamed and had fun in the beginning then when we thought the camera was coming up we went into our positions, me sleeping and the guys making faces at me. We were fine then all of a sudden something bumped the ride. Nick’s hands flew and he hit me on my shoulder farthest away from him with one hand. My hands also flew out of position and I accidentally hit him in the leg and our heads also collided with each other. It really hurt and just at that moment we saw a flash.

Great, I thought, the picture’s ruined. I rubbed my head and apologized to Nick while he apologized to me for hitting each other. Then we got out of the ride.

“Well, the picture’s probably ruined, wanna try it again?” I asked.

“Sure, but let’s see this one first, it’s gotta be somewhat funny.” Kevin suggested. 

I nodded my agreement and we headed over to the picture booth. I searched and finally I found it. I immediately started laughing really loud and Joe and Kevin joined in, Nick chuckled too but he mostly just blushed. It was funnier than I imagined. Instead of looking like we just got bumped it looked like Nick and I were in a couple’s embrace. His arm around my shoulder my hands on his leg and our heads next to each other. The shocked expression on our faces didn’t look like they were caused by pain it looked like we were just shocked by Kevin and Joe, who were still making scary faces.

“Wow,” I managed to say between my laughter. “I didn’t expect that. It’s hilarious. I wish I could keep it.”

“Yeah, why don’t you just buy one?” Joe questioned.

“Probably ‘cause she doesn’t want anyone to think that her and the curly haired freak are an item.” Kevin teased.

“No,” I said as I blushed. “I don’t have any money.”

“Oh, okay, well I’m gonna buy a picture and I’ll meet you guys at that bench.” Kevin replied as he pointed to a bench a little ways away.

We nodded and set off to the bench. When we got there I sat down on the bench while Joe and Nick stood near me. “What time is it?” I questioned.

“Lemme check.” Joe pulled out his phone. “It’s 3:30. Is that bad?”

“No,” I laughed. “It just means I have to call my mom in a half an hour.”

Kevin walked up to us right after I said that and then Joe’s stomach rumbled. It was unanimous we all decided it was time for some lunch. We searched the park until we found a place we’d all like. It was pretty retro and had really good fries. Joe kept playing with his food and making me laugh. At one point he made me laugh right when I was taking a drink of water and I accidentally choked on the water and spit it all out. Joe thought that was hilarious, but no one else did. So he was banned from telling any jokes while I was drinking.

When we finished eating Kevin paid for the food. I told him he didn’t have to because I had money for my own lunch, but he insisted. The thing was I’m pretty stubborn too so we might have stood there all day arguing over who would pay for my lunch if it weren’t for Nick who kindly stepped in and told me that I could repay Kevin later. And Kevin was just being nice. I relented and let him pay.

It was a little after 4:00 when we finished so I called my mom.

“Hey, Mom.” I said.

“Hello,” she replied.

“Well, you told me to call you at four so I am. And I was just wondering if I could stay for a concert. It’s at 6:00”

“Sure honey we’re gonna be here for as long as possible. It’s not often we get to go to amusement parks. Just make sure you call me when it’s done so we can meet up and go home.”

“Ok, Mom. See you tonight.”

“Yeah, see you. Bye!” my Mom replied.

 “Love ya, bye!” I said as I hung up the phone.

“So I guess I can hang out with you guys even longer if you want. And my mom just said I can stay for the concert.” I told Joe, Kevin, and Nick.

“Cool!” Joe replied. “Let’s go on more rides!”

“Hey, we just ate. Why don’t we take it easy.” Kevin said.

“Yeah, let’s go on the Ferris Wheel.” I suggested.

(hmmm, wonder what happens on the ferris wheel. lol)

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 5/26/2007 1:53 PM
 
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 5/27/2007 8:17 PM
 
 Modified By wicked_cool  on 11/19/2007 6:31:17 PM

here's the next chapter. i tried to post it twice yesterday and once today, but my computer's been acting up. grrrrr, it's kinda making me angry, but w/e. i hope you like it so far.

Everyone agreed and we were on it in no time. It was one of those Ferris Wheels that had booths so that a group of people could go on at a time.  We all settled in to our seats, Kevin and Nick on one side Joe and me on the other, and watched scenery out of the windows.

“Wow, the people are so tiny from up here.” I exclaimed.

“Yeah, hey look at the sky.” Nick pointed out. Out of habit I turned to see who was talking and didn’t realize that Joe was staring out my window and was really close to me. When I turned our faces were just a few inches apart. I blushed and thought about moving away, but I was already against the window. “Hey.” I said to Joe whose eyes were glazed over.

He seemed to snap out of whatever he’d been thinking of and moved away. He chuckled clearly embarrassed of how’d he had spaced out. A kind of peaceful silence enveloped us as we all stared out of the windows enjoying the view. That ended as soon as we got out of the ride though. Joe immediately started jumping up and down saying, “Bumper cars! Bumper cars! Bumper cars! I wanna go on the Bumper cars!”

I thought about it then looked at him and said in my voice I use when talking to my little siblings, “Okay Joe, we’ll all go on the Bumper cars but you have to promise to be on you best behavior. If you don’t settle down there’ll be no more rides, okay?”

Joe looked surprised at first then solemnly nodded his head and looked exactly like Noah does (my littlest brother) after I tell him to stop doing something he shouldn’t be doing. Then he said, “I’ll be on my bestest behavior.”

By now Nick and Kevin were trying soooooo hard not to laugh, but it was hard and they weren’t really succeeding. We eventually all started laughing about it and went over to the Bumper cars. The line wasn’t that long, but Joe kept us entertained with jokes. Kevin joined in and told a few of them himself. Some of them were really bad, but I couldn’t help but laugh.

When we got in our own cars. It was everyone for themselves. I went after the first person I saw which happened to be Kevin. Heh, bad idea, he quickly came after me and got his brothers to bump me too. I was really getting shook up, but then I signaled Kevin and asked for a truce, which he accepted, and we went after Nick and Joe. I was having a blast and couldn’t wait for the next ride.

As we got out of our cars and headed off in a random direction Joe checked his phone for the time. “Shoot.” He muttered. “We gotta go right now, we have to get ready for the concert.”

Kevin nodded and we all walked off in the direction of the stage. “I’ll just walk with you guys there and hang out somewhere until it starts. Kay?” I asked. Everyone nodded. We all talked about nothing in particular and all to soon we got there. I stood there awkwardly and looked over my shoulder, “So I guess I’ll be going now.” I said.

They all nodded and gave me hugs. Just before I left Kevin stopped me and said, “You are coming to the concert for sure, right?”

I looked at him quizzically, “Of course, unless something drastic happens. I don’t see why not.”

“Good. See you there.” He said relieved.

I nodded and walked off. Yeah, right they’ll see me there. There’s gonna be a million screaming fans and they’re supposed to pick me out from all of them. Not gonna happen, but today was nice. At least I have something interesting to tell all my friends. I thought, as I walked around waiting for the start of the concert.

 

(what happens at the concert?)

 

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 5/27/2007 10:15 PM
 
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 5/28/2007 5:13 PM
 

happy memorial day guys! hope you're enjoying it. and here's the next chapter. wow, i just realized how short this is. oh well.

The time seemed to fly by, especially since I spent most of it daydreaming about the unreal day I was having. Soon the concert would begin, so I quickly found a spot near the stage and waited the arrival of the Jonas Brothers just like all the other girls there.

I heard a bunch of them talking about, you guessed it, the Jonas Brothers. Some of them swore they saw them walking around the park. Some of them probably imagined it, but others I knew they were telling the truth. Like the girls who said they talked to the Jonas Brothers and after they were done the Jonas Brothers walked off to Mouse Trap. And some other girls who said they caught a glimpse of them with some strange girl with long brown hair. I giggled to myself when I heard that. I probably do seem strange to them.    

Before we knew it Nick, Joe, and Kevin walked out and were met by thunderous applause and a bunch of hoots, whistles, and screams. They began playing Year 3000 and I could hear everyone in the audience singing along.

I saw Nick scanning the crowd and he stopped when his eyes rested on me. He waved and winked. I waved back and thought, hmmmm I guess they can find me in a huge crowd. They played a bunch more songs and eventually brought out “the chair”. Every girl started screaming, “Pick me! Pick me!” 

I chuckled to myself and decided that now would be the perfect time to check my dad’s phone for the time. As I pulled it out of my purse I was vaguely aware of Joe talking to the crowd. When I looked at the phone I found it turned off. Whoops, I must have turned it off by accident, I thought. I turned it back on hoping that my mom hadn’t tried to call while it was off. ‘cause one of the other conditions of me going off by myself was to never turn off the phone, so she could always reach me. I checked the time, put the phone back in my purse and looked up. The audience was strangely quiet and I saw Joe staring at me. I looked around a little confused.

(why is joe staring at her?)

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 5/28/2007 6:35 PM
 
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 5/28/2007 7:16 PM
 
Please post more! haha..I really like it
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