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 5/8/2008 3:42 PM
 
 Modified By Atez  on 6/5/2008 6:50:43 AM

Listening to "Nation, Forgive Us" by We Are the Fury inspired this fanfic. Each chapter will have a line from the song. I'm unsure as to how long this will be, but hopefully you guys will like it.

Thanks to Mel for reading this prologue and wanting more. So if it sucks and you guys hate it, it's her fault for making me post it.

That being said, enjoy!

You wanna talk about indecision?
“What’s it going to be?” His voice said, ringing in her ears. He didn’t mean it to be so condescending, but her insecurities got the best of her, and the tears began to fall.
“I-I don’t know.” She replied, her voice wavering under the stress. She thought she saw his brown eyes softening but it could have been the light causing her to see things. It was dark in the room they were trapped in, and the small space they shared was causing her to become slightly dizzy.
The situation was one neither of them could remember how they got themselves into, but they knew they had one of two options: face whatever was on the other side of the door or run.
“We need to decide what to do. Now.” He said, sighing.
But decisions never come easy when they’re needed, and all she could think about was how this all began.


My Best Friends: Stephani, Crystal, Mel, Ren (forever and always!)
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 5/8/2008 3:45 PM
 

I said this on AIM, but I'll say it again:

WOW. SO INTENSE!

I'm really happy you're posting this! I need a good, AU, keep-you-on-the-edge-of-your-seat fic to read. And who better to write that than you? And if there's going to be death and destruction, ohhhh SNAP. It'd be the ultimate. XDDD


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 5/8/2008 3:53 PM
 

I agree! It's soo intense!

I'm so curious now!

Sooo many questions!

Which Jobro is it?

Why are they there?

WHATS GOING ON?!?!!?

PMS!!

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 5/8/2008 4:08 PM
 

ok that left me with questions which leaves me wanting more.

i can't wait to read more. so thank you to Mel for making her post this and thank you Ashley for actually posting it.

i love it already. post more soon girly please.


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 5/8/2008 4:09 PM
 

Devvo wrote

I agree! It's soo intense!

I'm so curious now!

Sooo many questions!

Which Jobro is it?

Why are they there?

WHATS GOING ON?!?!!?

PMS!!

aww, thank you! gah, i really don't know what to say to that.

thanks for reading!



My Best Friends: Stephani, Crystal, Mel, Ren (forever and always!)
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 5/8/2008 4:10 PM
 

luckieCrystal323 [the yellow ranger loves the white ranger] wrote

ok that left me with questions which leaves me wanting more.

i can't wait to read more. so thank you to Mel for making her post this and thank you Ashley for actually posting it.

i love it already. post more soon girly please.

aww, thanks crystal! i'm having so much fun writing this right now. so hopefully i'll have more in a little bit.

thanks for reading!



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 5/8/2008 4:17 PM
 

Ashley <3 wrote

 luckieCrystal323 [the yellow ranger loves the white ranger] wrote

 

ok that left me with questions which leaves me wanting more.

i can't wait to read more. so thank you to Mel for making her post this and thank you Ashley for actually posting it.

i love it already. post more soon girly please.

 

aww, thanks crystal! i'm having so much fun writing this right now. so hopefully i'll have more in a little bit.

thanks for reading!

no need to thank me for reading. i'd be a fool if i didn't though.

and it's good that you're having fun writing this. i think that it makes the stories better cuz you're more excited to write them instead of feeling like you have to. haha.


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 5/8/2008 4:33 PM
 

I <3 you guys. Did you know that?

Enjoy!

Just take a look at all the Seminole lies.
He swayed to the sound of the heavy bass thudding to the speakers. Tonight he was the life of the party. Tomorrow he’d be the saint in church all the parents told their children to look up to. He was an enigma; his true self hidden behind layers of lies. He could be anyone he wanted, and he craved a new lifestyle as often as he could get it. He was everyone he ever wanted to be at once. And everything he loved and hated meshed together to form a person nobody could forget, but yet nobody could remember.
The flashing lights flickered on his face, shining bits of it for the people dancing with and around him to see. Curls framed his face; dark brown and full of body, while his milky white provided the perfect balance. He had a few freckles, but they were more like artistic blots on his perfect face.  As the lights flashed from red to blue to green and back to red, he smiled, displaying slightly imperfect teeth that only added to his appeal. The blonde he’d met at the party sashayed her way over to him, with a look that was meant to attract him to her. But his attentions had already moved on to the pretty brunette in the corner. With a glance at his watch, he realized he didn’t have time to make contact, and while any normal guy would have been upset at not being able to meet up with a pretty girl at a party, he shrugged it off. The next weekend would bring another party and more girls whose faces he’d fall in love with for the evening.
Walking out of the club he’d somehow managed to get into even though he was much too young, he jogged the few blocks it took to get to the Family Life Center he was supposed to be at. Sliding his cell phone out of his pocket, he called his older brother Kevin for a ride home. He dodged the usual questions by coming up with lies that were well-rehearsed. Yes the Bible study was inspiring. No he didn’t see Melissa there. The phone conversation ended shortly after, with Kevin saying he’d be at the Center in a few minutes. He took the time he had to look himself over to see if any evidence of the true events that had taken place remained. Throwing the handful of phone numbers he’d had stuffed into his pocket on the ground, he was satisfied that he looked the part he was supposed to portray.
Two minutes later he saw his brother’s old jeep pull up and he smiled. It was too easy sometimes.
“Did you have a good time?” Kevin asked, oblivious as usual to the true events that had transpired.
“Always,” he said, trying not to fall asleep before they arrived back at their home.
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“Are you ready?” His mother’s voice called from downstairs. “We’re going to be late.” He groaned, looking himself over in the mirror once more. He looked to be the epitome of perfection. Dressed in his usual Sunday best, tie done perfectly and hair brushed down; nobody would suspect he was also the person from the night before. It was the part of his life that he loved. Getting away with so much while making it seem effortless. He knew not anyone could do what he did so often, and he was truly thankful that he was blessed with the ability to keep his stories straight.
“I’m coming mom!” He shouted to his mother, who he could imagine still standing at the stairway, tapping her foot impatiently, but smiling as she waited for her perfect son to descend.
“We’ll be in the car!” She called, and he didn’t need to respond, knowing that she would already be halfway out the door.
Grabbing his Bible, he looked at himself once more in the mirror before walking downstairs to go with his family to church. Last night he could have been anyone. But this morning he was Nicholas Jonas, son of the preacher.
 


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 5/8/2008 4:38 PM
 

Wow. Ash, WOW. The descriptions, the imagery, the ...NICCCCK. GAH. So hot. 
This is brilliant. I really can't get over how amazing this fic is. IT'S LIKE A DRUG, AND I NEED MOOOOORE. PLEASE. XDD

And can I just repeat:

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I'M IN THIIIIIIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDD

Love love love love LOVE this. SO MUCH. SO MANY CAPS IN THIS COMMENT. <3<3


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 5/8/2008 4:47 PM
 
 Modified By IRollMadDeepYo  on 5/8/2008 2:48:10 PM

I don't know what to say...

I'm totally in love with this!!

The descriptions, the imagery, the ...NICCCCK. GAH. So hot. 
This is brilliant. I really can't get over how amazing this fic is. IT'S LIKE A DRUG, AND I NEED MOOOOORE. PLEASE. XDD

Thats pretty much my reaction!!

I can tell I'm well going to jail for the thoughts this fic is giving me about Nick!

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