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New Post 5/3/2008 4:57 PM
User is offline airguitar94
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First Times 

Ok i am going to try to write a story.This is going to be my first one so please comment.Tell me if the story is good or not and if i should continue it.If i get at least three comments i will post the first chapter today.THANKS!

 

Everybody always remembers their first everything.Well almost.Like your first date,first kiss,first love,first actual dance stuff like that.But i don't remember any of that.Not because i have memory issues.But because i haven't had any of that.I am a pretty normal teen.Excepte my one rule that stops all that from happening.NO DATING.Its not one my parents make me follow or anything.Its actually my own choice.People think i am crazy for deciding this but i don't think so.I love my life its actually pretty good without all the dating and stuff.I mean i live in Los Angeles California on my own in a nice apartment i have a great job and i am attending college everything is perfect.Well almost.

I never thought i would ever EVER break my one rule.Not for one guy.And then here he came he walked straight into my life.I didn't want to give him a chance i never want to give anyone a chance.But something was different about him.Way different.

OK so there it is the introduction.Should i continue it?Remember three comments and first chapter will be up later today.

 
New Post 5/3/2008 5:23 PM
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Yes!! Continue!! I love it!


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New Post 5/3/2008 9:51 PM
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Ok so i said i wanted three comments before i posted but oh well.So here is chapter 1!

~Chapter 1~

Do You Ever Give Up?

I got to work right on time and walked in.I walked over to my desk and set my bags down.There was a note hanging off of my computer.

Lorraine meet me in the photoshoot room at 9:30.Big group today.-Jeff

I glanced at my cellphone.

"9:20."I mumbled to myself.

Then i grabbed my notebook,pen,and coffe.It never hurts to be early.

I walked out of my office and down the lond hallway and into the lobby.

"Hello Janice."I said to the secretary as i passed her.

Then i walked down the other hallway and into the photoshoot room where i found Jeff setting up a camera.

"Hey Jeff."I said

"Oh thank goodness Lorraine your here.I am a wreck i haven't had my coffe the clothing is nowhere to be found and i have no clue how the heck this camera works."Jeff said

I started laughing.

"Jeff take a breath here is a coffe."I said handing him mine."I will fix the camera and the clothes are in the normal room.I will go get the rack in a minuet."I said

I walked over to the camer and finished setting it up the correct way.

Then i walked out of the photoshoot room and down the hallway and out to the lobby walking past Janice again.

"Jeff got you on the run for something?"Janice asked

"Yes its another normal morning here at Popstar."I said with a laugh

Then i continued through the lobby and down the other hallway past my office and into the room labeled fashion.

I walked in and all the fashion interns were running around like crazy.They were fixing racks of clothing answering telephones and other things.

"I need the clothing rack for the ten photoshoot with Jeff!"I yelled

And everyone in the room stopped what they were doing and starred at me.

"Now!"I yelled

Then they all started going crazy again but soon i got the rack of clothes.

"Thanks."I said

Then i walked out of the room and back to where Jeff was.

"Here it is Jeff."I said

"Thank you."Jeff said

Then when i came out from behind the clothing rack i was greated by a suprise.The band i happened to worship was standing right there before me.

"Oh boys this is my assitant Lorraine."Jeff said motioning towards me."Lorraine this is the Jonas Brothers as you know."Jeff said

"Hey."I said as casually as possible.

"Hello."They all said in unison

Then i shook all there hands.

"OK boys go pick your clothes and get changed."Jeff said."And Lorraine you can have a seat on the couch."Jeff said

I smiled at Jeff and took a seat.

The boys came out about tne minuets later all dressed and ready to go.

"Alright i am going to do solo photos first.And Nick your lucky Jonas one."Jeff said

Nick walked over to the set and Joe and Kevin came and sat down beside me on the couch.

"Hey."Joe said from beside me.

"Hey."I said

"So do you like working here?"Joe asked

I turned and looked at him

"What?"I asked

"Ok can't you see i am trying to make small talk.Only because i figured it would be really weird if i just randomly asked you out."Joe said

"What?"I repeated

"Ok i can see you don't understand me well.But do you want to go out.Like on a date?"Joe asked

"I don't date."I said

"Oh boyfriend?"Joe asked

"No."I said

"Parents?"

"No."

"Me?'

"No.I just don't date at all."I saoid

"Oh i see."Joe said

"Ya sorry."I said

"That's ok."Joe said

"Alright Joe your up."Jeff said

Then Joe left my side on the couch and Nick took his spot.

 
New Post 5/4/2008 2:24 AM
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This is great!! I love it! PMS.


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New Post 5/4/2008 2:33 AM
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I like it.

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