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New Post 4/8/2008 7:38 PM
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This Is An SOS! (A Nick/Fan FF) *plz comment 

*I have alot more that i've written but I want to see if people like it first (4 comments and i'll post the next section- i dont do chapters)

“Elena!” My mom yelled from down stairs, “Hurry up!”

“Coming!” I lied. I quickly ran to my desk and opened a new web browser on my computer. I had to check JBF for my last daily dose of Jonas for the next seven days. It’s going to be so hard being cut off from technology- tell me, how will I survive? The page was taking forever to load, “Come on!” I yelled at the screen, if by magic the paged loaded. I scrolled down the home page looking for the latest blog entry that Katie and Karleigh had left. Only one… I frowned, but read the title, “Jonas Vacation- It’s About Time!” I read the blog:

“Jonas Vacation- It’s About Time!

The Jonas Brothers are finally getting the break they deserve, a recent insider told us. They’re going on a vacation! Where to? We don’t know. How long? Mystery. Guess we’ll have to wait and find out.”

I smiled. It really was about time the boys got a break. They’ve been touring non-stop, going to so many interviews, being mobbed every day, they need a breather! The only sad part about this was that this means no JB for ‘x’ amount of days. I crossed my fingers that the “vacation” wouldn’t last longer than a week.

“Elena!” My door flew open, “I told you to come on, we’re going to be late!”

“Sorry mom!” I said grabbing my American Eagle tote off my bed and my white “Joe Jonas” Ray Bans off my dresser, “Did dad load my luggage into the car?”

“Yes, only about an hour ago.” My mom started to walk down the hallway, “Hurry! Turn off all the lights, we’re all in the car.”

I rolled my eyes, my mom was so demanding sometimes. I quickly signed off my computer and turned it off. “Bye guys.” I blew a kiss to the thirty six Jonas Brother posters hanging on my wall. I flicked off my light switch and started to run downstairs, “Bye sweet home!” I said opening the front door, then I shut it- summer had officially started.

 ******<3******

 

“Yes! Our evil plan is working!” Joe laughed from the computer.

“Really? No one has ratted us out?” Kevin asked from the coach.

“Not yet.” I said getting up to see what Joe was looking at, “They’re going to sooner or later.”

“Well Mr. Negative, ruin our vacation why don’t you.” Joe said pushing me away once I got to the computer screen.

“Don’t tell me you’re on that fan site again!” Kevin said also getting up to see what was going on.

“It’s addicting!” Joe said wide eyed.

“Looking at yourself is addicting?” I laughed seeing that Joe was on the homepage for JonasBrothersFan.com – a fan site dedicated to well, us.

Joe flipped his hair and looked at me, “You know it.”

Suddenly we heard a knock on the door, “Guys, come on- we got to get on before everyone else.” Dad appeared opening the door.

I sighed, “Do we really have to sneak around for the next seven days?”

“Can’t we just chill like normal people?” Kevin said grabbing his bag off the hotel room’s floor.

“You’ll have time to chill later.” Dad said raising his eyebrow.

“That’ll be hard- we’ll probably be mobbed by fans at the pool.” Joe said laughing once more.

“Not really- only two teenage girls on this trip.”

I was shocked, “How!?”

“Did you send out a letter saying that this cruise was ‘infested with mice’?” Joe asked trying to be funny.

“Yes Joseph,” dad said sarcastically, “that’s exactly what we did.”

“Wait, really?” Joe said stopping in the doorway. I couldn’t tell if Joe was being serious or not.

“No!” Kevin pushed Joe through the threshold, “Don’t be stupid.”

I laughed. Looked at the messy hotel room one last time and closed the door. Summer had officially begun. It’s been a long time before our last vacation and my mom and dad finally convinced our agents to give us a break. Which of course Kevin, Joe, and myself are very thankful of. It’s going to be nice sailing the Pacific ocean without a worry of getting mobbed- I mean do we ever get a break? We love our fans to death but there’s something called personal alone time. And for the first time ever, I really hope those two girls on the ship… hate us.

 ******<3******'

**As you can tell- this is a Point of View Story- elena's and nick's point of view- i'm good at the POV so dont worry it wont be annoying- pinky promise- now comment!

 
New Post 4/8/2008 7:44 PM
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really good pms!


yay
 
New Post 4/8/2008 7:50 PM
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this is good.

pms!

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It's official: Stephani, Ashley, & Brittany = VICIOUS! That's a warning to all!
Stephani with Kevin, Ashley with Nick, and Brittany with Garbo, FYI!
 
New Post 4/8/2008 8:11 PM
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bump! TWO MORE COMMENTS PPL!

 
New Post 4/8/2008 8:18 PM
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I really like this so far. Post more soon :)
 
New Post 4/8/2008 8:37 PM
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HERE'S MORE!

 

 

Elena’s POV:

 

“Touch me one more time and I’ll kill you!” I said smacking Nate’s hand from my face.

Nate stuck out his tongue, “Because I’m so afraid of you!” In case you didn’t know- I have the worst little brother on the planet. The most evil nine year old ever. If only Frankie Jonas was my brother! I’d trade him for Nate any day!

“Stop fighting with Nathan!” My mom said, defending Nat for about the fiftieth time in the past half hour from the front seat of my family’s car.
”I’m not!” I said rolling my eyes, “He’s bugging me!”

“Who’s the older one?” My mom said in her ‘you’re-the-bigger-sister” tone.

“Whatever, you always take his side!”

“I don’t take sides honey.” My mom said looking back at me and Nat.

I huffed, “You al-“

Nat interrupted me, “Are we there yet?”

“Just about.” My dad replied from the driver’s seat.

“How much longer?”

“Five minutes.”

“I can’t wait that long!” Nate complained, “I have to go pee!”

“That’s disgusting!” I said plugging my ears.

“Not as disgusting as this!” I watched as Nate licked his hand and out of no where smacked it on my shoulder. I screamed and my dad swerved the car, pulling over.

“What the heck was that?” My dad turned around quickly.

“You little brat!” I said ignoring my dad, “I hate you! You-”

“That’s it!” My mom cut my sentence off, “You’re grounded Elena.”

“You can’t ground me!” I said not believing what I had just heard.

“Watch her.” My dad said pulling back onto the road.

“But it’s a vacation, I can’t be grounded on a cruise either!” I glared at Nate.

“Two nights. No pool. No going out to the opening dinner tonight. No going on deck without me or your dad.” My mom said sternly.

“That’s so unfair!”

“Life isn’t fair!” Nate sing-songed. I shot him my signature death stare.

“Then learn to get along with your brother.” My mom said looking out the window- this meant the conversation was over. But I wanted so bad to just yell at my parents, I mean seriously, how could they do this? Grounding me on my first cruise ever? To Mexico? They haven’t’ been anymore low. And the worse part of this all, well it’s not even my fault- it’s Nate’s!

 

******<3******

 

“It’s a pleasure having you here.” The captain of the cruise said extending his huge hand out to us. I smiled and shook the captain’s hand after Joe and Kevin.

“Thank you.” I said kind of shyly.

“I’m Captain Henderson.” He said looking at all of my family, “And just let me know if you need anything at all.” We all shook our heads, this included: me, Joe, Kevin, Mom, Dad, and even Frankie, who honestly? I don’t think really knew what was going on. Frankie was paying attention more to the huge control/navigation panel to his right.

“Thank you so much, we’re happy to be here.” My dad said.

“We’ll that’s good. And by the way, you boys will be happy to know that you’re in luck- only my daughter and another are the only girls ages 12 - 16 on this cruise.”

“That’s so weird.” Joe said still not getting over the fact that there are such things as coincidences.

“Weird but true.” Captain Henderson said laughing.

“Well we’d love to meet your daughter.” Kevin said sucking up to the adults again.

“I’m not so sure.” Captain said raising her eyebrows, “She’s what you’d like to call obsessed.”

“We love meeting fans.” I said truthfully.

“We’ll maybe during the end- I’m trying to keep your stay on the down low.”

“We understand.” My mom said smiling, then suddenly a huge horn blew.

“Looks like everyone else is starting to board, would you like to go to your cabins now?” Captain said leading the way out of the control room.

“Sure thing.” My dad said pushing Frankie away from the steering wheel, “Come on Frank.” I heard him whisper into Frankie’s ear.

“I wonder how old his daughter is.” Joe said slipping next to me.

I rolled my eyes, “Twelve through SIXTEEN. You’re eighteen- find someone your own age.”

“Oh, well then I’m sure you can find someone then.”

“You need to stop Joe.” I said.

He shrugged, “You cant fight true love, Nicky.”

 

******<3******

 
New Post 4/9/2008 9:39 PM
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BUMP!

 
New Post 4/10/2008 9:21 AM
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New Reader

this is a really good fanfic....POST MORE SOON PLEASE


 
New Post 4/10/2008 3:02 PM
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Re: This Is An SOS! (A Nick/Fan FF) *plz comment 

Yippee. An update. I loved it!
Nick better find true love for real!!
PMS PMS!

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My Fics & Oneshots
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Spencer, Julia Rose, Ashleigh, Emily, Emma, Alora, Crystal, Ashlynn, Corinne, Erin, Cara, Rachel , Ashlee, Caeli, Jamie, Molly, Danielle, Lauren, Stephani, Brittany, & Ashley
It's official: Stephani, Ashley, & Brittany = VICIOUS! That's a warning to all!
Stephani with Kevin, Ashley with Nick, and Brittany with Garbo, FYI!
 
New Post 4/10/2008 9:28 PM
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I LOVE THIS!!! Please update some more...I would have a freakout if I was on the same cruise as them... haha "SHe's what you would call obsessed"... PMS..

 
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