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New Post 3/30/2008 6:00 PM
User is offline CaR<3jB
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  
Thank you all sooo much! haha Ashlee, my trip was amaaaazing. And I know you guys just want to hear a funny story, right? lol so I was in Costa Rica, and I shared a hotel room with my three close friends. The first night, our hotel room was really small and was right next to the one that these four guys, who were also on the trip, were staying in. I had just gotten in the shower, while the three girls and two other girls were just hanging out in our room. I realized I forgot a towel, so I stuck my head out the door and saw one of the guys, Connor, standing on the bed holding one of the curtains and trying to hang it up. It turns out that he had opened the window, climbed through it, and knocked down the curtain in the process. I got my towel and went back into the shower, and only a few minutes later, the two other girls, Anna and Rebecca, run into the bathroom, while I'm taking a shower. I started freaking out and told them to close their eyes, asking why they were in here. It turns out that another one of the guys, Eli, had come into the room, just as one of the chaperones, Mrs. Schwalbert, knocked on the door and came in. Connor hid behind the TV, which didn't work because he's really tall, and Eli was stuck in the window. Rebecca and Anna came in because they didn't want Mrs. Schwalbert to get mad at them. None of them got in trouble, but it was still hilarious. =] that's my story. really long. lol. Maybe more later? idk.
6.28.07//10.18.07//2.17.08//2.25.08//7.22.08<3

May your jello always wiggle.


Thank you so much, Molly!

Carly's Fanfics

I wanna crash, I wanna fall
I wanna be somewhere in the middle
Somewhere in the middle of something
It's better than nothing
I just need a little, I just need a little
Since I don't wanna be nowhere
Something's makin' me go there
Somewhere in the middle with you.
 
New Post 3/30/2008 6:07 PM
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  

first, i love your story (the ff) and second the costa rica story sounds pretty funny. hahah. keep writing more(:


later :)
 
New Post 3/30/2008 8:15 PM
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  

 

Here's the first chapter...I know it's short, and a little slow, but it will get better. Also, if you're wondering where I got the title from, it's from a song, called Gone Away, by a girl named Jessica Love. I only know of her because her brother is in my grade and goes to my school. She's a really good singer, so I would recommend searching her on iTunes and listening to the three songs she has. I know the song doesn't have much to do with the story right now, but it will. =]

 

Chapter One

                It was the first day of winter break, and Hadley had just stepped into her white Acura after school and was headed to work. Living in Colorado, practically the only thing people did in the winter was ski…or snowboard, for that matter. Hadley’s parents owned an enormous ski hill in Colorado, and being their daughter, Hadley worked there on weekends, and now, during her winter break.
                She pulled up to the massive snow covered hill, past the many non-vacant condos surrounding the property, and parked in a front row spot, next to the enormous sign that read “Arctic Mountain”, the name of the resort. Because they owned one of Colorado’s biggest mountains, Hadley’s family was very well off. She got practically whatever she wanted, but rarely asked for anything, not wanting to come off as a spoiled brat.
                “Hey, Mike,” she said cheerfully to the twenty-something guy standing behind the registration counter inside the main building. She hung up the puffy black North Face jacket she had just been wearing and walked behind the counter.
                “Hadley, Hadley, Hadley,” he replied in the British accent of his that Hadley deeply envied, shaking his head. “Five minutes late? What are we going to do with you?” he joked. Hadley rolled her eyes and shoved her Coach purse into her cubby.
“Mike, you need to get a life,” she suggested, laughing as he stuck his tongue out at her. “Has it been busy today?” she asked while putting on her nametag.
                “There was a steady flow of boarders, but not quite as many skiers,” he told her. “It’s actually quite depressing. Things were so much better before the snowboard was invented.”
                Hadley laughed. “I agree, but boarding brings in at least 50% of the profits,” she reminded him. Her parents had owned the ski hill for at least twenty years now. Hadley was 17, so she had spent her entire life skiing with her older brother, and more recently, snowboarding. Being the only one who lived at home, she got to know and hang out with the employees at the ski hill. They were like her family, mostly because her parents were never around.
                “Yeah, yeah, whatever,” Mike replied sarcastically.
                Hadley scanned the calendar, groaning. “Lessons tomorrow? I hope it’s not some whiny little brat who doesn’t know how to ski.”
                Mike glared at her. “Um, isn’t the point of lessons to teach people how to ski? Plus, I’m pretty sure it’s some teenage boys.”
                Great, Hadley thought. Just what I need.
~~~
Joe had never been to Colorado before, except on tour. His parents wanted to try something new, so he and his three brothers agreed to head there to go skiing. They had been on an international tour for the past six months, and they needed a break. He wasn’t too thrilled about skiing; he was more excited about learning how to snowboard.
Their black SUV drove past the intimidating mountain, crunching along the gravel road. They had specifically asked for a secluded condo, and that was what they got. It was decent amount away from the rest of the guests, but they were also close enough to walk to the main hall. Joe sighed as he stepped out of the vehicle and walked through the front door.
The inside was even more exhilarating. It was definitely what you would expect a cabin at a ski hill to look like: rustic furniture accenting the wood log walls, animal heads protruding from above the massive fireplace. The kitchen even had stainless steel appliances. Like we’re ever going to cook, Joe thought as he followed his brother, Nick, up the stairs, lugging his suitcase behind him.
Joe dropped the suitcase on the floor of his and Nick’s room, flopping down onto one of the two queen sized beds and thinking about the past tour he and his brothers had been on. It began in Europe, then they made there way through certain parts of Asia, eventually getting back to the U.S. to play a few big venues. Don’t get him wrong; Joe loves performing, but he sometimes thought playing the same songs over and over each night got a little old. It also didn’t help that he was having a bit of a hiatus in the love department.

And that’s why he was hoping this vacation would give that a little change.

 


6.28.07//10.18.07//2.17.08//2.25.08//7.22.08<3

May your jello always wiggle.


Thank you so much, Molly!

Carly's Fanfics

I wanna crash, I wanna fall
I wanna be somewhere in the middle
Somewhere in the middle of something
It's better than nothing
I just need a little, I just need a little
Since I don't wanna be nowhere
Something's makin' me go there
Somewhere in the middle with you.
 
New Post 3/30/2008 8:36 PM
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  

Carly, Carly, Carly. How I missed your writting when you where away. Great chapter!!

So, did you get a lot of writting done on your trip? I hope so, that means more chapters for Ashlee!!  lol.

POST MORE SOON.


[2.27.08]
Reminisce On Memories

The Official CAKE Blog, yo!!

My Only One [Nick FF]
Fall Back Into My Life [Sequel to My Only One]
My Only One [Fanfiction.net version]
 
New Post 3/30/2008 8:50 PM
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  

 [ashlee] wrote

Carly, Carly, Carly. How I missed your writting when you where away. Great chapter!!

So, did you get a lot of writting done on your trip? I hope so, that means more chapters for Ashlee!!  lol.

POST MORE SOON.

hmm...let's say I tried. But when you're riding in a bus along a bumpy dirt road, and you're sitting next to your friends on the plane, it's kind of difficult. lol. But I have chapter 2 and part of chapter 3 written, plus ideas for a Nicky FF. =]

I'll hopefully have chapter two up tomorrow...my mom's kind of p/o that I was on the computer all day, so we'll see...

COMMENT!


6.28.07//10.18.07//2.17.08//2.25.08//7.22.08<3

May your jello always wiggle.


Thank you so much, Molly!

Carly's Fanfics

I wanna crash, I wanna fall
I wanna be somewhere in the middle
Somewhere in the middle of something
It's better than nothing
I just need a little, I just need a little
Since I don't wanna be nowhere
Something's makin' me go there
Somewhere in the middle with you.
 
New Post 3/30/2008 8:52 PM
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  

awesome post more soon


Feb.14-saw the Jonas Brothers Photobucket Photobucket Thanks for the siggy me_loves_dj_danger i love it
 
New Post 3/30/2008 9:28 PM
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  

 CaR<3jB wrote

 [ashlee] wrote

 

Carly, Carly, Carly. How I missed your writting when you where away. Great chapter!!

So, did you get a lot of writting done on your trip? I hope so, that means more chapters for Ashlee!!  lol.

POST MORE SOON.

 

hmm...let's say I tried. But when you're riding in a bus along a bumpy dirt road, and you're sitting next to your friends on the plane, it's kind of difficult. lol. But I have chapter 2 and part of chapter 3 written, plus ideas for a Nicky FF. =]

I'll hopefully have chapter two up tomorrow...my mom's kind of p/o that I was on the computer all day, so we'll see...

COMMENT!

Yeah, when I went to Chicago, we took a train. A 10 hour train ride. So, I brought my notebook to write. But it was soo buppy and mom wouldn't let me bring my laptop. Also, I was sitting next to my 23 year old brother. And everytime I would pull out my notebook. He would start reading over my shoulder...awkward...

And a Nick fic!! Ashlee is excited.


[2.27.08]
Reminisce On Memories

The Official CAKE Blog, yo!!

My Only One [Nick FF]
Fall Back Into My Life [Sequel to My Only One]
My Only One [Fanfiction.net version]
 
New Post 3/30/2008 9:46 PM
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  

Carly, just found this.... and it's already fantastic. more soon, pretty pretty please?

--Kat


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New Post 3/30/2008 11:49 PM
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  

CARLYYYY!!!!
You started a new FanFic!

*celebration dance from old FanFic*

YAY! I haven't gotten to do that dance in FOREVERRRR.

Ahh carly, this is AMAAAAZING. Totally SPECTACULAR. I'm loving it.

Post more soonnnn!!! PLEEEASE!

Ahh! COSTA RICAA?

Fun stuff!

You gotta tell me ALLLL about it!

 


N-I-C-K-J-O-NAS!

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New Post 3/31/2008 4:49 PM
User is offline CaR<3jB
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Re: Gone Away [New Joe? FF]  
BUMP! hopefully more in a little bit. and thank you all for your wonderfully amazing comments! =]
6.28.07//10.18.07//2.17.08//2.25.08//7.22.08<3

May your jello always wiggle.


Thank you so much, Molly!

Carly's Fanfics

I wanna crash, I wanna fall
I wanna be somewhere in the middle
Somewhere in the middle of something
It's better than nothing
I just need a little, I just need a little
Since I don't wanna be nowhere
Something's makin' me go there
Somewhere in the middle with you.
 
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