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New Post 3/17/2008 4:57 PM
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&That's What Happens When You Let Your Heart Win [UPDATE] 
Modified By JONAS♥GIRL;   on 8/4/2008 2:31:14 PM)

Hey, it's Allie! So here is my new fanfic and it'll be AMAZING! =]
I promise! Make sure to read&comment!

Chapter 1

*Flash*
“Over there!”
*flash*
“Oh! Right there!”
*flash*

“Christine! You almost dropped the camera! Be careful!”

She gave me a glare. 

“Calm down, Allie. It’s fine- loosen up, will you?”

Delanney chimed in. “Yeah, it’s time to have fun!”

I guess my sisters were right. I mean, we haven’t been on a vacation in about 2 years and this trip was bound to be fun without our parents. “Okay, I’m sorry. It’s just, well, you know how nervous I get on boats.”

My sisters hugged me.

“It’s okay.”  

There was a sudden jump at the sound of the ships horn. 5 minutes until we depart from L.A. I grabbed Delaney and Christine’s arms.

“Come on! Let’s go find a good spot!”

We had already put our things in our rooms so we didn’t have to worry about losing anything on deck. We stayed climbed up the stairs to the top deck where we found a spot by the railing. The horn blew as the engines started and we sailed off. Everybody was waving down to their friends and families on land and was cheering loudly.  I waved to my parents. The boat started to go faster and we were officially on our vacation. I felt a piece of hair in my face. The wind was blowing extremely hard. I looked over at my sisters who were still taking pictures.

 

                    BAM!

 

 “Owwwww.” I rubbed my head.

 Christine ran over to me. “Oh gosh, Allie! Are you okay?!”

“Yeah, I’m fine.” Not. What hit me? I felt someone tap my shoulder. “Um… excuse me? I think I just hit you in the head with my iPod. Are you alright?” I turned around and saw a boy, a bit taller than me, with brown hair and these gorgeous brown eyes. He was smiling. “An iPod?” I giggled. “Yeah, I guess so.”  I looked down at my feet and saw a lime green iPod video in front of me. I reached down to pick it up and accidentally brushed the boys hand. I looked at him and shyly backed away. “Oh, sorry.” I muttered. His face was turning red. “Oh It’s okay,” he smiled. Boy, was he cute. He reached his hand out towards me.

 “I’m Joe. What’s your name?” I took his hand and shook it. “Allie,” I replied.

 “Allie.. pretty. Oh, um, pretty name I mean. Well your pretty too! Like, uh-“ I laughed. “Thanks, you’re not so bad yourself.” We smiled at eachother. Ruining my cute guy moment, Delaney stepped forward. “Hey! I’m Delaney!”

“And I’m Christine!”

Joe politely shook their hands. “Nice to meet you two. Are you girls sisters?” I nodded. “Yep!” He smiled. “Cool… Cool…” There was a short akward silence, until two boys came up behind Joe. One younger boy and an older one. They both had the same eyes as Joe and both had curly hair. “Hey man, did you find your iPod?” The older boy took notice of us. “Oh, well hello!” The other boy stepped forward. “Hey, I’m Nick. These are my brothers, Kevin and- well, you know Joe.”

We all laughed. Kevin looked at us. “So, you girls on vacation?”

Delaney sarcastically replied, “Nahh, we’re just sailing to Mexico for 4 days. No biggie.” Kevin smiled. “I see we have a wise guy here, don’t we?” He chuckled. Delaney batted her eyelashes and laughed.

“So, with your parents I assume?” I shook my head, my hair still blowing in my face.

“Actually no. Our parents are letting us start out the summer by ourselves.”

Christine shook her head. “Yeah! No more curfews-thank goodness!” We all laughed.

“Awesome, us too! Then we should hang out soon?” Delaney nodded. “Of course!”

 

 

 

We all exchanged numbers and promised to hang out later.

“See you girls later!” They said as they walked away.

“Bye guys!”

I saw Nick turn around and wink at Christine. Suave.

I nudged her in the side and smiled.

 

 

 

I have a feeling that this cruise was going to be the best one ever- simply amazing.

 

 

xoxo!


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New Post 3/17/2008 5:03 PM
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Re: Simply Amazing [FF] 

Wow...It's just the beginning and I LOVE it!!!!!! =D

PMN!

Sarah xox


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New Post 3/17/2008 5:04 PM
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Re: Simply Amazing [FF] 

I love it!
So cute.
Can't wait to read more. =]
PMS!


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New Post 3/17/2008 5:24 PM
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Re: Simply Amazing [FF] [Chapter 3 - 3/21] 
Modified By JONAS&hearts;GIRL;   on 3/21/2008 1:23:01 PM)

hehe thanks =]


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New Post 3/17/2008 5:31 PM
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Re: Simply Amazing [FF] 

Wow this is really good so far!!!

Cant wait to read more!!!!

:)


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New Post 3/17/2008 7:42 PM
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Re: Simply Amazing [FF] 

 i'm so glad you guys are liking it!
i wasn't sure anybody would. xD

and MAYBE, just maybe i might post the next chapter today. let me get just two more comments?

=]


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New Post 3/17/2008 8:05 PM
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Re: Simply Amazing.[FF] 
Modified By JONAS&hearts;GIRL;   on 3/18/2008 2:38:11 PM)

hah, okay i lied. i want to post so bad! so this next chapter is really long, so i'm breaking it up into 3 parts.

Chapter 2- part 1

"Delaney, do you know where my perfume is? It's not in my bag, I spoke into the cabin-room phone. You see, we each had our own rooms right next to eachother. We're getting ready to go out. I heard some ruffling through the other side of the phone. "Yeah! I found it! I'll bring it over in a minute - you ready?" I felt relieved. "Yeah. Bring Christine with you. See you soon!"
I hung up the phone and fixed my hair one last time. My side-swept bangs were perfectly in place, with my brown hair waving down to my shoulders. I looked at my outfit: Red tank top, blue shorts with ruffles at the bottom, black flip-flos, and of course, my diamond stud earring my best friend got me for my birthday. They matched my blue eyes perfectly.

knock! knock!

I went over to the door and opened it.  Christine nearly knocked me over. "Girl, you look fierce!" I laughed and twirled around. "Thanks!"
Delaney shook me. "Come on! I wanna go!"
"Okay, okay! Just spray my perfume first?"
Delaney dug into her purse and pulled my perfume out and sprayed it all over me. "There. NOW can we go?!" I smiled and grabbed my sisters arms as we walked off to get some ice cream on the main deck.  Even though it was dark out, the weather was perfect. The sound of the ocean was so relaxing. We got our ice cream and made our way to the top deck, where we always go. We were hanging by the railing, taking pictures and joking around when I felt a vibration in my side pocket. I pulled out my phone.

New Text Message: Joe!

Hey! What R U up 2? 
You and ur sisters wanna hang?
-Joe :)

I replied back:

Yeah! We're on the top deck! See you soon!
-Allie ;)

Oh gosh. How do I look? Does this make my hips look big? Man. Why am i getting nervous?!


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New Post 3/17/2008 8:50 PM
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Re: Simply Amazing.[FF] 

wms


 
New Post 3/18/2008 6:01 AM
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Re: Simply Amazing.[FF] 

o i likey post more soon please!!!


My Fan Fiction's plez read if you would like too!! ~ Golf, Gig's &....Jonas?? ~~ A New Begining I Don't Want!! (sequel to Golf, Gig's, &....Jonas??) ~~ Every Other Weekend ~~ How could this ever happen to me?!?!? ~~ my dreams have finally come true......i hope ~ pm me @ ~!mz.sarah jonas!~
 
New Post 3/18/2008 4:07 PM
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Re: Simply Amazing.[FF] 

i really like this! Pms please! :D



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&& Thanks a ton for the siggie Molly!
 
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