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 3/13/2008 2:25 PM
 

ahhhhh! my thread wont work... so now im realllllly sad.... so yeah im gonna make a new one... at least till the other 1 gets fixed... if it gets fixed...

 


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 3/13/2008 2:43 PM
 

so as far as i can tell... someone posted something at 10:56 or something like tht bt idk who...

and... yeah i dont wanna post another chapter till i know where Nicole left off b/c she wasnt commenting last night... so yeah tell me where u left off, if u can remember and i will post somethin... so yeha

im gonna keep checking the other thread tho...

 


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 3/13/2008 2:52 PM
 

*Life*Love*Insanity* wrote

so as far as i can tell... someone posted something at 10:56 or something like tht bt idk who...

and... yeah i dont wanna post another chapter till i know where Nicole left off b/c she wasnt commenting last night... so yeah tell me where u left off, if u can remember and i will post somethin... so yeha

im gonna keep checking the other thread tho...

 

that sucks that the other thread isnt working. but yea i think that might have been me who commented, well idt it was that late so idk. but yea i read the last 2 chapters and the one with me in it! haha and i left a really funny comment and you didnt get to read it : ( haha lol

i hope the other thread starts working again, but i guess i can get used to this one and so ummm..... i think im all caught up sooo... that means you can post more!



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 3/13/2008 2:53 PM
 

OMG! i think that i was the last one to post something! Because i posted something at somepoint between 10 and 12 this morning in my history class...

OMJ IM SO SORRY if it was my fault!

I remember that the last thing that you posted was the chapter when everyone left me and Nick and i told him that i hated him then the flashback with Nicole and the kiss, and then we decided to be friends again and the las part was when everyone was eating...

 


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 3/13/2008 3:14 PM
 

k so i think ill post the gabby chapter again just incase Nat didnt get 2 read it... and i saw in the forum it said it was Nicole... dont know... but yeah.... wish i saw those comments.... i realised tht somethin was wrong when i couldnt check during my computer class 2day in school... i was like... ahhha! not cool...

but yeah we will just have 2 beef up this thread... i do miss the old 1 tho... so heres the last chap from last night and a chap 4 thios afternoon...

~* 16 *~

 

~* Gabby *~

 

I can’t believe them! They left me here. More importantly, they left me alone, with him.  “Gabby?” he said, I tried to ignore him, but he continued. “Gabby, why do you seem to hate me?” I looked up from the magazine I was reading, “because I do hate you Nicholas.” I was mean, but I didn’t care. “Then why do you hate me?” he was so sweet, but I wasn’t going to let him again. “I hate you Nicholas, because you were wrong. I did love you, and it hurt so much when you did that.” I wasn’t being exact, but I was hoping he would know what I was talking about so I wouldn’t have to say it.

“What? Gabby, I remember you, I just don’t remember what I did to make you hate me.” He was sincere but I was angry. “Nick. You don’t remember breaking my heart? Are you serious? That Nicole girl. Remember. Yeah thought so.” Seeing the look on his face, he seemed really sorry and I knew he remembered.

 

~* Flashback *~

 

“Gabby, will you be my girlfriend?” Nick asked me.

“Wow, Nick, uh, I don’t know what to say right now. I mean you’re going on tour and I don’t know how it will work out. Can I have a day to think about it?” I asked.

“Yeah, Sure Gabby. I love you.” He was so sweet and innocent, how could I ever say no?

“Thanks,” I gave him a quick kiss on the cheek and got in my moms car to leave. I waved to him and he waved back.

The next day I went to see him.

I walked into the room and I couldn’t believe my eyes.

He was standing there with Nicole, my now Ex- Best Friend making out. I was so upset. I was going to tell him that we could be boyfriend girlfriend but now that was simply not possible.

I let out a scream and he turned around. “Gabby,” I saw his mouth form my name.  I shot him a look of hate and took off in the other direction. He ran after me, but no one could ever catch me when I decided to run, I was on track and always finished first, no matter who I was running against.

I ran all the way home because my mom had dropped me off and I couldn’t call her to come back, it would take too long and I would have to deal with him.

Halfway home it started to rain, but I kept on running, I didn’t care. Running was the same in the sun or in the rain, I didn’t care. It helped me clear my head as well as get away from the threat.

When I got home I collapsed on my bed and cried my heart out.

 

A few weeks later my mom informed me that we would be moving. I was ecstatic; I wouldn’t have to deal with Nicole or Nicholas anymore.

 

~* End Flashback *~

 

“Oh, Gabby. I’m so sorry. Nicole, I never saw her again. I didn’t want her, I wanted to you. She surprised me and kissed me, not the other way around.” He sounded sorry, but he kissed her back, so he couldn’t have been that sorry. “Nick, you kissed her back, so it is still partly your fault.” I knew I was being mean, but I didn’t care, he deserved it, or at least in my mind he did.

“Gabby, I’m sorry. Please forgive me. You can’t hold this grudge forever. Can we at least be civil? I would like to simply try being your friend.” He was sincere, and I was starting to melt, the old Nick I used to know was shining through. That sensitive, calm, easy going, amazing guy I fell in love with, and part of me still was in love with. “Ok, I suppose we could be friends again.”

We made up and he offered me a hug, but that was that. We went back to doing our own things for the rest of the day while Joe, Marni, Kevin, and Nat were MIA.

When everyone got home, we sat down for dinner, I took my seat, next to Nick and the tension was gone, it felt so nice. He smiled at me a few times and I smiled back.

Oh No, it was happening again, I was falling in love with him again, this couldn’t end good.

 

~* 17 *~

 

~* Marni *~

 

After dinner we headed upstairs to do something. We had no clue what to do, just that we wanted to do something.

First things first, I headed over to the computer and turned on the music. We sat down in a circle trying to decide what to do. We turned out to be a very indecisive group and wasted an hour trying to think of something to do.

Finally Gabby suggested, “Let’s watch a movie.” We looked around and everyone seemed to agree that a movie would be a good idea. “Kay, so what do we want to watch?” I asked heading over to my tower of DVD’s, “I’ve got just about everything.” Everyone shouted at the same time and I couldn't understand anything that was being said… “Uh, no clue what you all just said.”

After a bit of bickering over what we would watch, we decided on 50 first dates, comedy and chick flicky, perfect combination.  I popped the DVD in the player and got comfortable with Joe. I noticed Nat getting really close with Kevin, but I wasn’t going to say anything, I knew she liked him so I just assumed the feeling was mutual now. Gabby even sat with Nick, pretty amazing to me; she went from hating him to cuddling with him.

After the movie ended I didn’t really want to move, I was comfy. I guess Gabby could see that because she got up and took the movie out and put it away. “Another one?” she asked. “Sure” I said, I wasn’t ready to give up my seat, and I don’t think Nat was either. Gabby picked out another movie and everyone agreed, The Fast and the Furious, action packed thrill ride… loved it. I so wanted the car Vin Diesel drives in the end, well at least till it gets totaled.

By the time that movie was over it was 11 and we decided to get ready for bed. I think everyone was exhausted from a long day of running around because in no time at all everyone was asleep.

My alarm failed to go off in the morning, because I believe someone *cough Joe cough* unplugged it. We managed to get up with the aid of Myra, she wasn’t going to let us skip out on another day of school, or leave her behind again.

I quickly got dressed and threw my hair in a ponytail. Nat and Gabby threw on clothes and we were out the door in 10 minutes, granted we looked really bad, none of us had taken time or effort in our appearances, meaning no makeup, no matching uniforms, nothing. Gabby looked amazing anyway, she’s got those soap star good looks that never go away, no matter how much effort she puts into her appearance.

As for me and Nat, yeah we looked OK, but not even half as amazing as normally. So we got to school and stuck it out for the whole day, it seemed to go by really fast, yet really slow at the same time.

We got home around 2:30, everyone in tow, well Myra, Gabby, and Nat anyway. I no sooner got home that my cell rang.

“hello.” I answered. It was mom, “Hey, can you go get the twins for me, I am running really late and I cant make it to their school for 3.” I was kind of annoyed, but agreed, “Yeah sure I’ll get them.” “Thanks.” She sounded really busy and she hung up.

“Ok, so I have to go get Dani and Des from school at 3. Anyone want to come?” I asked walking into the room where everyone was sitting. “Psh, YEAH!” Joe screamed. “What’s better than picking up little sisters at school?” I laughed at him. Frankie came into the room, “You’re picking up Dani and Des?” he asked. “Yeah, you want to come Frankie?” He smiled, “YES!” I laughed and looked at Joe, “I think your brother has a crush, or a double crush on my sisters.” The three older Jonases laughed and I went to change before we left.

We got to Dani and Des’s school and didn’t have to wait very long; they were out a few minutes after we arrived. “Dani. Des. Over here.” I yelled to them. They happily ran over to me and both started talking bout their day immediately, “Wowah girls, slow down.” They looked at each other and laughed. “Sorry,” they said simultaneously. Freaky twin thing going on there. “So, Guess who I brought with me.” “Who? Who?” they said together. “Look.” They saw Frankie and their faces brightened, so did his. It was so cute, little kid love. Adorable.

I walked over to Joe, “I love little kid love, its just so cute.” I hadn’t even finished talking and the three children were up next to me, “can we go to the park?” they made Frankie ask. “Uh,” I looked at Joe, “I suppose, but we have to be back home by 4:30 so I can get ready for the wake. Kay?” I smiled at Joe and we all got settled in the car.

We headed off to the same park I had spent the day at with Joe yesterday. The three little kids ran straight to the slides and jungle gym. It was nice, the sun was shining and there was a slight breeze, just enough to feel the chill, but not enough to be too cold to be outside.

We watched the three from the swings, they were so adorable. At 4:15 I decided that we should go. “Des, Dani, Frankie, let’s go home. It’s getting colder and I need to get ready.” They begrudgingly got down and we left. It didn’t take long to get home, so we were home really fast. Everyone got out of the car and Dani shared a look with Des. “Thanks for bringing us to the park Marni.” I smiled, “No Problem.” They turned around and looked at Frankie, he blushed as they approached him, one on each side. All of a sudden, I want expecting this, but they attacked him from each side, a simultaneous kiss on each cheek. Frankie was red before, but now, he was even redder, almost purple. He turned around and ran to Mrs. Jonas, “MOMMY!!!” he was screaming. Joe and I were laughing hysterically.

We went into the house and got dressed for the Wake. I fixed my hair and makeup and was ready by 5:15. Mom had made a quick supper so we could eat on the run, I couldn’t really eat, so I just had a quick bite of my sandwich then I saved the rest for later, if I got hungry.

We left the house around 5:30 because we wanted to get to the funeral home early so as to say goodbye again in peace, without everyone there.

so yeah... hope we can get back into the old thread, but we will have 2 deal w/ this 1 for now

<3's and :( RIP old thread!

<3's Marni


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 3/13/2008 3:25 PM
 

awww im goin to cry when its the funeral : (

oh yea! and last night i posted my other nick names that i decided to use, so you alredy no Moe, and then Kat, but i couldent decide for nick and gabby......gick is a funny name but it sounds kinda gross and nabby just sounds annoying....idk nibby, gack haha all these names sound gross, i guess nick and gabby arent meant to be if i cant make a good pet name for them : (, sorry Gack hahahaha



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 3/13/2008 4:25 PM
 

Nicole♥JB wrote

awww im goin to cry when its the funeral : (

oh yea! and last night i posted my other nick names that i decided to use, so you alredy no Moe, and then Kat, but i couldent decide for nick and gabby......gick is a funny name but it sounds kinda gross and nabby just sounds annoying....idk nibby, gack haha all these names sound gross, i guess nick and gabby arent meant to be if i cant make a good pet name for them : (, sorry Gack hahahaha

OMJ i was laughin so hard.,... and tryin 2 blow up a baloon... so that made it iteresting... and i dint kno about Kat... must have been b4 the thread got wrecked and after i went to bed... but yeah... i laughed at Kat b/c my friend Kat is here.... so it was like AWKWARD!! lol

so yeah i kno i kno somehow i didnt cry when i was writin the funeral...

but yeah soon enough...

lol

 


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 3/13/2008 5:26 PM
 

OMG! lol, i was laughing really hard and my friend Jadie was (once again) like -You're scaring me- And that only made me laugh harder, so now she thinks that im really crazy...

Marni! PMS!


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 3/13/2008 5:44 PM
 

lol gabby, and dont worry that happens to me all the time too. during class i will just start laughing to myslef about something im thinkin about and my friends always thinks its really creepy, but i cant help it! haahha

and yeah! pms(haha i always laugh when i write pms, just because of its other meaning and i can be really imature sometimes!! lol)

im like really hyper, i gotta get some air

and havent done this in a while Wasted-Cartel : )



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 3/13/2008 6:24 PM
 

lol laughing about a text message i got a few days ago... its hillarious....

but yeah ill post in a few mins...

and... uh,.... we havent polayed the 'im listening 2' game in a while so... i miss my old thread!

but yeah

matchbox 20 - bent

and im IMing Brittany right now...

lol felt the need 2 say that.. she started yellin at  me tht my story wasnt workin....

 


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March 15th 2008 ♪ Look Me In The Eyes Tour ♪ Verizon Wireless Arena ♪ Manchester, NH
August 7th 2008 ♪ Burnin' Up Tour ♪ Tweeter Center ♪ Boston, MA
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