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New Post 2/19/2008 10:38 PM
User is offline Rayy
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You Won't Find This (joint ff) UPDATED 
Modified By Rayy  on 3/3/2008 11:55:42 PM)

[hey pretty ladies! I'm excited to introduce the joint brainchild of Christina (misstinaboo) and myself.  It's shaped after the song, You Won't Find This (duh) by Carrie Underwood.  Feedback makes the heart sing and the fingers type faster. Enjoy!]

{sidenote. I have no idea why the fonts won't stay uniform. sorry!}

 

 

.001.

 

                Her expression was vacant as she glanced out the window, motionless between the pink cotton sheets that were wrapped around her tired body.  Outside, the sky and falling rain mirrored the emotions coursing through her veins that morning.  The light rumble of thunder sounded as hollow as she felt lying next to him.  Heaving a gentle sigh, she slipped her feet from where they were laced with his and paddled down the hallway in the direction of the kitchen.

                 From the stool where she was perched, Rachel thought about dancing.  Admittedly, she had two left feet and did not much enjoy the pastime, but here she was dancing the fine line between friendship and love. Sipping on the mug of hot chocolate she’d readied for herself, Rachel thought back on the last decade of her life. 

 

He’d been there through everything: the busted knees and the broken hearts.  Everyone knew that with time, the two would someday be together, but she’d never guessed it would have come so soon.

The day was still clear in her mind.  The warm July breeze kissed her neck as she dipped her legs into the lake near her summer home.  Their families were in up state New York to celebrate the holiday weekend, and the sounds of laugher and the sweet smell of watermelon filled the air.  “Are you all right?” he asked, sitting beside her on the dock.  Rachel nodded silently and offered a sideways smile. The wind was blowing his curls and she reached over to affectionately push the hair away from his eyes. As her hand grazed his cheek, he reached up and took it in his own moments before pressing his lips against hers.

The blood rushed to her face as she closed her eyes.  This was all she’d ever wanted; the moment felt so perfect here with him. His nose rubbed against her cheek, bringing a smile to her face.  Pulling back, Rachel looked into his eyes, pleading for any kind of response.  With a smile, he cupped her face and kissed her again. 

“Kids! Fireworks!”  Startled, the two separated again.  He stood up and offered her a hand, which she received and held all throughout the night.

 

“I’ve got to go,” his voice pulled her from the trance she’d fallen into. Rachel was surprised; she hadn’t even heard him come down the stairs. Matching his gaze for only a moment, she nodded and walked beside him to the door.  He slung his duffle bag over his shoulder as she swallowed the lump in her throat.  Rachel hated goodbyes.

 

“I don’t know why girls think they want this,” she’d said time and time again. “There’s nothing glamorous about dating someone who leaves you behind, sobbing on the street every three months. I wish you could stay with me.”

He would always chide the same response, “I never leave you behind, beautiful. You’re always in my heart.”

 

This time there were no tears.  Rachel stood on the curb with her arms folded, staring a hole into the ground as he packed his things into the trunk.  The cool breeze sent a shiver through her spine, the only sign she was still alive.

Walking to where she stood, he wrapped his arms around her and planted a soft kiss into the blonde hair that was whipping around wildly in the wind. “I’ll call you,” he promised.  Still she stood stiff, not even flinching when he attempted to tickle her side. “Goodbye beautiful.”  He waited, hoping she’d look up at him, but she simply bobbed her head to acknowledge she’d heard him.

With a defeated shrug, he climbed into the drivers seat and slammed the door.  In an hour he’d be dragging a tours worth of luggage onto a bus and leaving this rainy city behind.  He didn’t even have the memory of the sound of her voice to keep him company. Though she wasn’t looking, he waved out the window before driving away.

Rachel watched his taillights disappear in the light fog before turning on her heels and dragging herself back inside.  Her hair was now matted to her head, her t-shirt clung to her body like a wet rag, and her sweatpants tugged at her waist from the retention of water.  She smiled ironically.  Finally she looked as miserable as she felt.

She barely made it to the bathroom before collapsing to the ground in a fit of tears.  Her sister knocked lightly before coming in.  Everyone in the house was on guard on the days he had to leave.  “Come here,” Lydia cooed, pulling her sister into her chest. “It’ll be okay.  He always comes back.”

Rachel shook her head, still sobbing. “No,” she attested. “He’s not coming back this time.”  Lydia furrowed her brow in confusion. “We broke up.”  It was almost impossible to understand her between the gasps for breath.  Realization had finally hit, and Rachel was forced to utter the words she never thought she’d say. “Kevin broke up with me last night.


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New Post 2/19/2008 10:47 PM
User is offline Miss Tinaboo ツ
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

woop woop =D

i`m pretty stoked. you little amazing writer, you.


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New Post 2/19/2008 10:53 PM
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

With our luck, we'll be the only ones to comment on our own story. :(

hah oh well!


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New Post 2/19/2008 10:54 PM
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

I loooooooooooooooooooove it. Post more ASAP!


Read my stuff and I will seriously love you forever.

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New Post 2/19/2008 11:00 PM
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

you wont be the only ones!!! im always here!! ily!! pms!!! xoxo!

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New Post 2/19/2008 11:00 PM
User is offline Miss Tinaboo ツ
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

well, we should feel honored that erica took the time out of her busy schedule to read and comment! she cant even update her own story.

*crosses fingers college lets up on her a bit*

soooo.. i kind of want some more readers before i post my chapter, dont you agree?


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New Post 2/19/2008 11:03 PM
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

Amazing! God, this FF is going to be amazing. Tiner AND Ray! HOLY COW. This is a major FF...can't wait :D


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New Post 2/19/2008 11:06 PM
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

When I thought I was finally done with drugs,

you brought up my new addiction.

<3meech


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New Post 2/19/2008 11:08 PM
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

agree. :) patience is a virtue. hah


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New Post 2/19/2008 11:10 PM
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Re: You Won't Find This (joint ff) 

we'll we have kay, meech, and NIKI on board. i think they deserve the next chapter. hopefully it matches up to Rays magical writing abilities. =D enjoyyy. dude and its uber long too;; my bad!!!

Chapter 2;;

 

When she finally stepped away from her parents` dreams and towards her own, Tina found a job designing. Sure it wasn`t exactly what she had in mind, but anything that wasn`t behind a desk was fine with her. The company had approached her, asking for her help in designing stage sets for concerts and shows. Afterall, it was an opportunity to talk to famous musicians and singers, but she never expected to find something so much more than that.

She had heard of her new client before. The Jonas Brothers. Three brothers rocking out on guitars singing love ballads that had every young girl screaming and in tears. She giggle at the thought, remembering her younger days when Nsync and Backstreet Boys ruled her world.

The company she was working with adored her, her design style, and her work ethic. They gave her the opportunity to work on the Jonas project as the leader, with a few helpers in behind. This meant she got to meet face to face with the client and management to find out their ideas. Making sure she looked her best, looking like a young professional from head to toe, she stepped out of her apartment, into her car, and drove off to the local starbucks to grab a container of coffee to bring to the meeting. When she had finally arrived, she was greeted by security at the front door, and after passing, she ran into Niki. Niki was basically like her assistant, helping her on the new project, and was in love with the Jonas Brothers. She had been bouncing off the walls about the meeting which was about to take place ever since word got out that Tina was leading the project.

Niki handed Tina a folder full of papers in exchange for the coffee that Tina was clutching on to. She pushed the elevator button and they stepped inside. As the doors began to close, three boys rushed over sticking a hand out to stop the elevator. They pushed one another inside trying to catch their breath as the doors shut. The elevator music played and nobody had said a word, until a boy mumbled "Awkwardddd" under his breath. Another had raised his arm to lay a gentle smack on the back of his head as the other one giggled. Niki chuckled herself causing the boys to turn around and greet them.

"Hey how are you girls today, i`m Joe." a flirtatious Joe said as he stuck out his hand to shake with a grin across his face.

"I.. I.. I`m Niki" she finally stammered out as she shook his hand, her cheeks turning bright red.

"You must be a fan" he said when he noticed her slow reaction and cherry cheeks.

"YEAH!" she exclaimed, not bothering to hide any of her excitement.

"Sorry boys but this is our stop. It was nice riding with you" Tina quickly stated as she dragged the star strucken Niki out of the elevator and towards her office.

Niki stared back as the doors shut and asked Tina, "How could you ruin that for me!"

"Niki, they are our clients, we will see them in 10 minutes, and this was our floor. I have to grab some things before we head up, DUH" she laughed back at her, "You know, you can`t act that way around clients, we are going to be working with lots of stars."

"I know, I know" she mumbled back with a sad look on her face. "But its was the JONAS BROTHERS!" she screamed as her gloomy look quickly faded.

After gathering a few more items the two girls headed upstairs to meet with their star clients to discuss their stage design ideas for their tour. They walked inside and were greeted by management, who led them over and introduced them to the boys. "This is Kevin, Joe, and Nick" as the boys stood up and extended their hands for a formal business shake.

"Hi boys, it`s nice to meet you. I`m Tina and I will be leading your design team for the tour" she responded back as she shook each hand. "And you guys have already met Niki from our run-in earlier." Niki`s face turned red again as she formally shook each boys hands.

"Hey there Niki" Joe blurted out as he gave her the look, causing her to giggle and Kevin to nudge his side.

As the meeting got underway, there was lots of talk about "lots of lights!" and "Platforms!", and even "ramps!", each boy chiding in their opinion. Tina worked efficiently taking in each idea and jotting them down onto a pad of paper. When management had left the five alone to work together, they began talking about each other over numerous cups of coffee. Kevin kept peeking at Tina from behind his sunglasses, hoping that she wouldn`t notice. There was just something about her dark hair, glowing smile, and embarassing snort when she laughed that he liked. When their management had come back in to take them to an interview they had scheduled at a radio station in an hour, Tina thanked them for their time and began to collect her things. Niki had been flirting constantly with Joe as Tina kept reminding her that she couldn`t mix work and play. But something about that statement slipped her mind when Kevin had walked up to her, surrending a piece of paper with a number scribbled on it. She gave him a puzzling look and he told her,

"It`s just my number" through a chuckle.

"Oh, okayyy" she said, still confused. "Oh! incase I have some adjustments or ideas. Gotcha, here is mine, and if you think of anything else please let me know" she said with a smile as she wrote down her number.

He couldn`t help but laugh, wondering why giving his number was so odd. Her lack of understanding the situation caused him to blurt out,

"Well yeah, okay. We have that interview at the radio station, if you aren`t busy... it.. would be cool.. if you came to watch!"

Her cheeks were flushed as she bashfully looked down at her feet. Did he really just ask her that?

"Well, I`m only working on your project right now, I`m sure it would be fine if I classified it as business related. Could Niki come with me?" she questioned.

"Of course she can" he said as he followed everyone else out the door, "It`s at the Kiss station. I`ll see you there!"

 


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