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New Post 2/11/2008 12:00 AM
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Carolina in my Mind [Completed Joe FF - 7 chaps] 
Modified By Miss Tinaboo ツ  on 2/14/2008 3:14:18 PM)

sooo i have pretty much an idea of what i want to do with this story, and i pretty much have a sequel in mind if i can finish it =) anyway, be honest and tell me what you think;; if i dont have many readers i might not continue, but then again i just need a few commited ones. my other fic had a severe case of writers block and is on way hiatus until i decide to continue, ilike this one better anyway;; much more low key. soo here it is:

 

 

 

“This song goes out to that special girl” Joe said into his microphone as the music began to play.


It was a cover of James Taylor, and the girls in the audience began to scream. Joe knew that most of the girls there were so young they probably didn`t know what he was about to sing, but because he said special girl, he knew that they all secretly thought it was them. Joe knew who it was for. That girl, that one special girl he spent that one special summer with two years ago. They had a break in their tour, so the boys decided to spend the summer in North Carolina with their step-grandfather. He lived in an amazing house that was similar to one from the old southern country days.

 

“In my mind i`m goin’ to Carolina.  Can`t you feel the sunshine, can`t you just feel the moonshine..” with each word that he sang he pictured her face with her glowing smile, hoping that he would one day see her again.

Girls were screaming and swaying their arms, some even opened their cell phones to create light, and little sang along to the song.

 

“`goin to Carolina in my mind, gone.. i`m gone.” He ended the song softly and with a slight grin on his face.

 

Everyday and every night since that summer, Joe would fall asleep looking at the only picture he had of her.

 

--*Flashback*--

 

“Joe stop!” she laughed as  Joe ran after her through the field.

 

“You better run faster, i`m catching up!” he shouted back at her.

 

Soon Joe was right behind her, he grabbed her by her waist and threw her down on top of him.

 

“Joe!” she managed to get out through her giggles and squeals.

 

He knew that tickles were her weakness and she was laughing endlessly.  Finally he let go and she moved next to him in the field.  They were silent until Joe interrupted their moment.

 

“Look at that one Tina, it looks like a dinosaur” he said laughing as the clouds floated by.

 

“No it doesn`t, you just have an obsession with dinosaurs” she laughed back at him.

 

“Whatever, no I don`t. How do you not see it?”

 

“What if I were a dinosaur?” she questioned him jokingly.

 

“Then I would love you forever” he said turning on his side to look at her.

 

Tina was unsure of what to say and didn`t realize that he had been staring at her. Hearing those words sent chills through her skin. Closing her eyes to take in the gorgeous summer breeze, she was stunned when she opened them to see Joe leaning over her.

 

“Are you okay?” she asked him. Curious as to why he decided to block her view of the clouds floating by.

 

He didn`t say anything and just smiled. Tina decided that this moment shared together was rather amusing and began laughing at him. Joe still remained smiling, still saying nothing. Instead he leaned into her and she felt the warm caress of his lips to hers. Tingles went through her spine and all she could do was smile. Joe finally released and lay back down to look at the sky. He moved his hand closer to her and she did the same; and they kept silent holding hands until the night sky began to show through.

 

--*End Flashback*--

 

The picture Joe had been staring into was taken the same day they shared their kiss. He hadn`t kissed a girl since, and often lingered on the memory that still remained of her in his heart. He wished on a star every night through the tour bus window, hoping that one day he would be able to stare into her deep brown eyes and run his fingers through her soft brown hair again. He knew he had to see her again… someday.

 

“Still dreaming Joe?” Kevin interrupted as he walked back to his bunk.

 

“The dream will be real again one day Kevin, you wait and see. I`ll find her” he uttered back to him, inhaling and exhaling deeply at the thought of not being with her.

 

“Hey we just got the rest of the tour venues in” Nick spoke to them as he walked back to his bunk.

 

“Whatever,” Joe mumbled as he started to drift into a sleep. Little did Joe know, Nick knew what the venues would mean to Joe. There could be a glimpse of hope for the heartbroken rockstar.

 


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New Post 2/11/2008 12:13 AM
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Re: Carolina in my Mind [new Joe FF] 

omjaj! this is awesome! plz pmsasap! i luv u and the story! luv it i tell ya! tina r u from Carolina!?!?! well i would not qualify Carolina as the south, Alabama is way more southern! ll! yea im from there! lol! well pmsasap!


heyyy! : D indecisive girlie here. = P well pm me at kaybuggie loves jonas. yep yep. well love yall! p.e.a.c.e. ♥
 
New Post 2/11/2008 12:21 AM
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Re: Carolina in my Mind [new Joe FF] 

haha yeahh i`m in carolina =) where i live is pretty country, but i agree bama is wayy southern! but i love the country =) and thanks! there are only about 6 more chapters to this story i already have it mapped out, but nothing is typed yet. but hopefully there will be a sequel depending on how this goes. i`m glad somebody likes it! thankss!

bumping.


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New Post 2/11/2008 1:27 AM
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Re: Carolina in my Mind [new Joe FF] 

haha! well i liv in the suburbs! but all mi fam lives in the country! lol! yea im a dixie chickie! lol! well i am enjoying this so much! plz pmsasap! i luv ya!  ttyl! xoxo! oh yea u r so welcome!


heyyy! : D indecisive girlie here. = P well pm me at kaybuggie loves jonas. yep yep. well love yall! p.e.a.c.e. ♥
 
New Post 2/11/2008 12:17 PM
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Re: Carolina in my Mind [new Joe FF] 

okay well since i`ve already got an idea of what i`m doing it should take long for me to update and such, but i worked last night and we cleaned the store (gross) so i slept in today bc i was so tired;; i`m gonna jump in the shower and probably go find another job (because according to my dad, one isnt enough) and when i come home i will def updatee! hopefully i`ve got a new reader or twoo. thanks so much for reading! if i can think of a way in the sequel i can squeeze you in the story =) maybe nick`s gf or something. i`ll get your info laterr!


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Re: Carolina in my Mind [new Joe FF] 

Chapter 2;; Tina`s Point of View

"Do you want this?" Tina called out to Rebecca from inside her walk-in closet.

She and Rebecca were taking the day to clean out her closet to give away to the needy. Rebecca had suggested that Tina get rid of her old stuff and the two of them could go shopping, to help Tina start over.  Ever since Joe left, Tina had been dragging around for the next 2 years. She was still bubbly, but Rebecca knew it was only a cover for her public appearance around friends.  Rebecca knew that inside, Tina was crushed by Joe and wouldn`t be able to let go, she also knew what Tina`s ex-boyfriend had done to her, and all the pain that was built up inside of this poor fragile girl.

"No, quit asking me that! We are giving all of this stuff away and then tomorrow we are spending the whole day at the mall" She cried back out to her over the music that was playing inside the room.

Tina was rummaging through her things when she came upon a yellow dress. Joe`s favorite yellow dress.  The same yellow dress she wore the last day she was supposed to meet him. Joe and Tina spent their whole summer without talking on the phone or emailing or anything like that.  Joe would leave Tina little letters at her door or in the mailbox telling her where to meet him the next day and at what time.  They found it more adventurous. Tears began to trickle down her face as she remembered that last day.

--*Flashback*--

Tina,

meet me in our spot at the field at 10.

love, Joe

Tina spent the morning getting ready and decided to put on Joe`s favorite yellow dress.  Afterall, it would be their last day together and what better way for him to remember her. After she was finally satisfied with her looks she dashed down the stairs and out the front door. She began walking down the road and towards "their" spot in the field that they had spent most of their summer. The breeze was light and you could smell the flowers all around. The bright Carolina sun shone down on her giving her a warmth throughout her body. As she approached she began to look around, but couldn`t see him anywhere.

"Maybe he is hiding" she had thought to herself.

She found their tire swing and stood waiting for a moment or two. Finally, she glanced down and saw an envelope inside the tire. Tina picked it up and slowly opened it as her hands were trembling.

--*End Flashback*--

"Tina? Are you okay?" Rebecca interupted as she walked over to find Tina crying holding onto the dress. "Oh  no.." she mumbled sadly as she knew what was happening.

"I.. can`t.. believe.. I couldn`t.. say.. Goodbye" she commanded out of herself as she continued sobbing.

Rebecca has seen this hurt in Tina before, and knew that the only thing she could do was hold on to her. Tina lay her head on Rebecca`s lap as she played with her hair. And they both sat in silence as the music continued to play behind them.

 


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New Post 2/11/2008 1:58 PM
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Re: Carolina in my Mind [new Joe FF] 

First, the title caught my eye.  The first thing I thought of was how many people on the board would recognize it. Not that it's bad if they don't, I just thought it was funny.

Then I realized you were writing it and I just HAD to look and boy am I glad I did.

I have class but I hope there's more when I come back!


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New Post 2/11/2008 2:20 PM
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Re: Carolina in my Mind [new Joe FF] 

aww thanks guysss =) and Ericaa! you better update yours and tell me when auditions start for your new storrryyy!!! pS, there are only like 4 more chapters, and hopefully if it goes well i`ll start the sequel. this is the last chapter i have typed so hopefully i`ll start the other ones soon =)

Chapter 3;; Joe`s Point of View

The next morning Joe woke up to the list of venues laying on top of him. Why had Nick left them there for him to see? Nick knew Joe would find out eventually. Joe decided to look at their stops so that Nick would get off of his case.

“Hey Joe, what are you doing?” Kevin asked as he sat up in his bunk.

“Looking at the stops Nick left on my bed” he replied back as he began to read them out loud. “New York, New Jersey, Ohio, Virginia, Tennessee…” Joe looked up as he slowly got Tennessee out of his mouth.

“Uhh, What?” Kevin asked as he saw Joe`s face.

“North.. Carolina..” he read out to Kevin.

“We haven`t played there in two years” Kevin remarked.

“I know that Kevin.” Joe quickly snapped back.

“Well, what are you going to do?” he questioned him, knowing the answer.

“Kevin you know that I don`t know where she is, how to get in touch with her, or if she is even living there anymore”

“I don`t know what to tell you then bro” Kevin said as he jumped off his bunk to go grab some breakfast.

“I mean… even if I did find her, the odds of her wanting to talk to me ever again are slim” Joe stated as he began to think of that last day.

--*Flashback*--

The buses were early and Joe was told that they had to leave immediately in order to make it to their first stop. He was unsure of what to do and knew that Tina would be sleeping and her parents would be furious if he showed up at their door at 2 in the morning. Instead he wrote her a letter and ran it to their special summer spot hoping that Tina would be able to find it in the morning.

Dear Tina,

It is 2a.m. and I had only a second to run here to leave this for you. The buses came early and everyone decided we needed to leave to make it to our first destination on time. I wish I could stay today to see you and spend one last time on our swing, and lay in the field with you spotting out clouds, but I can`t. Please forgive me for not staying, you know that I would if I could. I will miss you and everyday I will dream of your bright smile and brown eyes. Always remember me.

Forever yours
Love, Joe.

--*End Flashback*--

Joe knew that he had hurt Tina, and knew that she probably wouldn`t ever forgive him for what he had done. He ripped up the Venue list and threw it on the ground, throwing the covers back over his head. The chances of seeing her would be slim but he would pray that that slim chance would come true. He started to picture her eyes and that bright smile and drifted back into sleep. Nick came over and shook him awake.

“Joe we`ve got to get ready, stop bumming around”

Joe stumbled out of his bunk and they began their tour that would lead him to the place he found his heart.

 

 


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New Post 2/11/2008 3:22 PM
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Re: Carolina in my Mind [new Joe FF] 

bumpity bump.

i`m pretty much almost done typing up this whole fic, i`m halfway throgh the next to last chapter.. but i dont want to post anything until i see more readers, i hate saying that bc its greedy, but i dont like posting up this stuff if nobody really cares lol. so anybody?


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