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When The Time Is Right [[LAST CHAPTER EVVERRR IS UP]] 
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Here it is, everyone :) Thank you so much for all the people who auditioned. :) You rule!

My hand shot across her face. “You take that back, you bit.ch.” I never swear, ever, but this time it was like it escaped me before I could stop it.

She brought up her hand, covering the now-red mark engulfing her cheek. “No. I was right. You are a worthless piece of crap. It’s no wonder why you’re fat, ugly, and boyfriendless.” She smirked, evil in her eyes.

“Mandy... what happened to us?” I asked, my voice full of hurt.

“Life did, Carly. Get over it. People change. Well, excuse me, some people change. You haven’t changed one bit. You are still an immature baby,” she taunted, noticing tears were trickling down my face.

“You’re wrong,” I spat, wiping the tears off my cheeks. “YOU’RE the one that’s changed. You became a horrible friend, losing all of your values. How could you? Do you really hate me THAT much to steal my boyfriend from me?” I asked her, my sadness turning into anger.

“I don’t hate you, Carly. I just don’t  get you.” She laughed an evil laugh. “What I really don’t get, though, is how an ugly nobody like you managed to get a boyfriend like Mark.”

I pulled back my hand to slap her again, but I stopped myself. At that second in time I realized we were really never friends. She never complimented me, but instead always bossed me around, making sure everything went her way.

“You know what?” I asked her. I didn’t even let her guess as I barged on, “I feel sorry for you. I may be a “nobody”, but you are a sad, pathetic person. Having to mooch off other people to get a boyfriend. You sicken me.” I turned on my heel, feeling dignified that I hadn’t slapped her.

As soon as I got around the corner, I bawled my eyes out. I ran all the way to my house, slammed the door shut, ignored my mom as she called out to me, and threw myself on top of my bed. I didn’t understand why I was crying. I never really loved Mark, and I hadn’t lost a  REAL best friend. I brought my head up off of my pillow and turned on my radio, thanking God it was Friday.

 


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New Post 1/17/2008 8:26 PM
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This was awsome! PMS!


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New Post 1/17/2008 8:32 PM
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pms!



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intense.

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New Post 1/17/2008 8:35 PM
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ugh, bad day much?

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New Post 1/17/2008 8:49 PM
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I woke up four hours later, my hair smothered to my face, my eyes so unbelievably dry, and my bed bouncing up and down.

"ONE MORE DAY! ONE MORE DAY! ONE MORE DAY!!!!!!!" My two, teenaged twin sisters, Heather and Kassy were jumping up and down on their knees, right next to me on my bed. "AUGHHHH ONE MORE DAY!" They both screamed.

I picked my head up. Woah. Bad idea. I was so dizzy. I carefully sat up. "Guys, I know you're super excited," I slowly said, "but seriously. I'm SO TIRED and not up for this now, okay?" I asked them.

They stopped jumping. "Don't be such a Debbie Downer!" Heather scoffed. "Yeah," Kassy retorted, "Debbie Downer!"

"I'm sorry. I'm excited guys, really, I am. I've just, had a really bad day," I explained, fresh tears coming to my eyes as I recalled the horrible memories.

"Sorry," Kassy said, giving me a hug.

"It's okay, darling," I said, returning it.

I looked at the clock. 6:34. I was four minutes late for work!

"CRAP!" I shot up, out of bed, yanking my hair into a bun, and in the process, pushing Heather off the bed.

"OUCH!" She shrieked.

"Sorry!" I apologized, jumping around, trying to tie my shoes. "I'm just, REALLY late."

"Carly. Calm down!" Heather stood up, grabbing my shoulders. "Ashleigh called and said that she'd take your shift. She said that you should call her when you get a chance. Something about you being upset?" She looked at me, eyes full of concern.

"Thank, God," I sighed, sitting down on my bed.

"Yeah. We're going to let you get back to bed," Kassy said, sliding off the bed.

"You know what guys?" I asked them.

"What??" They both asked, turning around to look at me.

"I think that we should begin to P-A-R-T-Y PARTAYYY for our CONCERT tomorrow night!"

"HECK YESS!!!!!!!" Both girls shouted.

I ran over to the radio and switched on our favorite band, who just so happened to be the band we were going to see the next night.

As soon as the song came on, we jumped up on the bed, singing, jumping, and dancing along.

"OHHHHHHH THIS IS AN S.O.S, DON'T WANNA SECOND GUESS, THIS IS THE BOTTOM LINE IT'S TRUEEEEEE!!!" The girls shouted, dispersing in laughter.


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That was awsome! I would have loved to throw my siblings off my bed! xD


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New Post 1/17/2008 9:03 PM
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New Post 1/17/2008 9:11 PM
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haha t the last part i actually started dancing in my seat. haha.

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loving it so far!

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